I offered the sample below as I like the abstract golfer and the background drawn in a simplistic approach. Would like a mountain background as mountains are the in the vista of my teaching area. 
 
I tend to like the circles that show the motion of the golf club but this is not essential. Please note the circles in some of the other samples I have included. 
 
I would like to keep the design simple and clean enough that I could use it for embroidery. Will also be used for personal branding on website, golf bag, caps, stationary and letterhead. 
 
Other samples can be found here: 
http://www.langebaanestate.co.za/ 
http://robertjangolf.com/ 
http://www.planetruthgolf.com/ 
http://lpga.com/default_new.aspx

When you have a moment could you please check out the comments I left concerning your design? 
 
Thanks, 
 
Steve

Steve Patterson Golf